Revision to-do list:

Content:
- talk more about my personal connections with the text
- Bring more relate-ability to the table
- Bring a couple more facts about the text

Style
- give the text more of a consistent theme
- Connect the relationships between my topics and theme more fluidly
- Flow in a smooth order

Structure
- Double check to make sure grammar is correct
- Check my accuracy on references and factual topics
- Double check the assignment sheet for requirements